on the highest point in London, once a upon time there lived a mouse. A mouse was scanning around for the cat or the oner of the house to see if Thay could get him but instead he spotted some cheese, so he bolted to get the cheese, but the cat walked pasted and saw the mouse and bolted at the mouse jumped back into the hole. Then the cat jumped after, but the hole was too small for the cat, so the cat left the kitchen and the mouse bolted out of the hole and got the Cheas safely.
Hi Flynn,
I loved reading your story, especially because of your clever use of vocabulary. Your word choices made your story come to life and feel quite unique. You were successful also using our technique of the week (beginning with a “Where Things Are” sentence). Well done, keep on writing!